Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holidays.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter.
-thank them for the photos and for the holidays.
-explain why you didn’t write earlier.
-invite them to come and stay with you.
Hello Kathy, and Nathalie,
I hope you’re doing very well. It was amazing to see you and have a great time together last month. I felt extremely grateful because you shared your room with me. I remember those mornings trying to get the ticket for the Rock Concert. We had so much fun.
Besides. I was surprised by the pictures. I want to thank you both for these precious memories. Indeed, I liked the album. In addition, I could have never imagined such holidays in Malibu. You have an environmentally friendly place to be enjoyed. Also, do you remember when we finally won the race cars? The other team was upset because they failed.
On the other hand, I’d like to apologize because I couldn’t reply soon. There was a delay during the journey. The weather was awful and we had to make a stop in Madrid, Spain. Finally, I got home late in the night and I was very tired. I hope you can forgive me for writing to you at this time. I needed to recover from long hours of travel.
To end, I want to invite you to my house next month. You can stay here with me without hesitation. I’m planning to visit Halloween Park and get some scary customs. I look forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Naile.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, look, really, so, well, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54185022026 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33160782287 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669603524229 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8505261499 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.8636363636 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.3181818182 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331812895166 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740651259562 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638608142556 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15380636929 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865997296915 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.57 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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