Some people think that the government is wasting on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is argued that some may consider that the government is addressing funds to the craft instead of spending it on other essential matters. This essay agrees
with this statement because money should be driven to the population's main services despite the governance fund much in statecraft agencies and public art.
First, all components of craft build bridges between cultures, either dance, music, or singing. However, some benefits persist in hard social and economic times
Because authorities should not be at the expense of other sectors like education, healthcare, and defense. Besides, those are significantly crucial at all times. Moreover, a recent study found that roughly 40 percent of Haiti's habitant are dying of famishing due to a low input in the agriculture sector.
Secondly, the government must spend more money on a donation campaign than on public work of arts. Generating funds through craft festivals and exhibitions will attract visitors and will employ many people. Too often, law control assumes
Inappropriately large sums on craft. Nevertheless, for people who suffer from poverty, shelter, food, and medicine would be helpful to receive aid from the state. Also, a recent study found that in Canada around two million dollars were spent on three famous paintings knowing that educational programs for aboriginal people are fundamental.
To conclude, some people believe that the state is spending bills on crafts than on other important subjects. Money is not directed to society's needs because
craft is a fundamental subject to deal with more than necessities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.428 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7306409504 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5346782457 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188958663175 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547292859551 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782951684177 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827257875377 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725290523794 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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