People are surrounded by advertising which has increasing effect on our lives Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects
It is argued that some individuals consider that advertisement guides us to items that are not our first needs. Also, others opine about products that could better our lives. This essay agrees with the first statement because advertising could lead people to waste money and time.
First place, advertisements are everywhere, anytime and at any moment. When people are talking and walking, they do not realize that. However, human beings deal with advertising as it is part of daily life. It is said, that advertising is the main source to increase a big company's profits. For instance, it is in cellphones, posts, TV, arts, newspapers and magazines, and many others.
Secondly, living in a place without advertising could be awful. People would not know about any product promotion, and big businesses would not have high incomes. Around the world, advertising are a designed way for people to buy and waste money on kinds of stuff which are not needed but also to supply the most fundamental things. For example, to get a new house, the car of the year, or a magical anti-wrinkle cream. Nevertheless, small businesses are rewarded because they sell and show articles and items most used in daily life.
To sum up, I consider that advertising has positive and negative effects on all societies. However, it continues attracting many individuals to get informed through technology and everywhere about materials stuffs to be used and spent money. That is why people should avoid some advertising that can conduct them to ruin their lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7252334482 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4215057398 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.8125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206013836284 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060371356893 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647420421794 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11335717895 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322380715127 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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