You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.Write a letter to this friend. In your l

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:

• thank him for the invitation

• mention why you can not attend the birthday party

• offer to meet him some other day

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Robert,

Hello, how are you? Hope that you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to express my happiness on the 8th Birthday party of Julie. I wish her best in life but I apologise that I will not be able to attend the party

I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May all her wishes and desires come true. I would also like to thank you for inviting me to her birthday party. I owe her a birthday present do let me know her choices and preferences?

Since last month, I was promoted to the position of senior manager in my organisation and I have to manage all the work and ensure that there are no faults and flaws it will be very difficult for me to leave the work and be a part of the party. Moreover, since it is the end of the financial year there is a lot of work pressure and many crucial projects of the organisation has to be completed within the deadline to ensure company’s growth an investor’s satisfaction.

I will organise all my work in the office and will plan a visit to meet you and Julie in Canada next month. I will try to stay with you for a couple of days and we will have a lot of fun and enjoyment.

Once again, I apologise for not being a part of Julie’s Birthday party.

I hope to see you soon. Take care.

Best wishes,

Prabhpreet Kaur

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t I will not be able to attend the party I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will not be able to attend the party I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May a...
^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et me know her choices and preferences? Since last month, I was promoted to the ...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e care. Best wishes, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.252 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55250151812 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8490481387 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9285714286 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153207490411 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062314897647 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560182813484 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877914112306 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642700662582 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.