You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library. You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company, they could not find it.
Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you should do.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am active member of your library and writing this letter to inform you about the borrowed book which I lost on last Saturday.
After getting the book issued, I took the bus from city centre to old bridge. In the bus, there were few passengers and I seated near to rear gate. I do remember trying to open the book but incessant rain diverted my mind. On reaching home, I curiously wanted to read book so I tried to take out from bag and at that time I realized that book was no more in the bag. Thereupon, I contacted lost and found department of Aone bus service line and lodged about misplaced book. The officer from bus department informed that all lost item are gathered at one central place and returned within three days after basic identification. Yesterday, I received call from the department confirmed that no such book was found in the bus I traveled.
I tried to reach library staff on Monday but found that the day is weekly off for library. I am Nottingam university student from India and completing my course on Tuesday and traveling back to India on same evening. Therefore, I would not be able to discuss in person about the lost books. I would like to know what can be done in this situation and how can it be compensated.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Raj
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50826446281 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49250293132 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8145518035 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9285714286 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243809749202 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746356482031 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061333078666 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155761520506 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672041040543 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.