The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
Human practice to learn from other humans or imitate others is not new and lots of people are benefited by copying from different people. It is common to see that people wear the cloths like famous personalities or buy consumable goods alike neighbors. I fully agree that people follow each other particularly in fashion and consumer items.
History is full of incidents where people or society drew ideas from other people, resulting improved life or adopting various ways to enrich the life. The most common things to follow are attires which easily influence the other individuals. People when see the vibrant cloths other people are wearing, they try to put-on same style of cloths and want to look like other people. For instance, fashion shows are conducted and give opportunity to viewer to not only find out the new style of cloths but also the manners with which models pridely showcase the designs and attitude. Moreover, some people are influenced so much that they imitate their living style, food habits and way of talking. This trend is commonly seen in young people when they watch famous personalities or friends wearing stylish cloths.
Another item which is quite imitable is consumer goods such as mobile, tech gadgets and other consumables. Nowadays people do not talk about the qualities in other person but they definitely discuss the gadgets which other people are using. Though some gadgets are costly, people like to buy the costly items and feel happier. For example, my aunt yearly changes the phone because they wealthy friends buy the expensive mobile phone frequently. Besides, people buy the jewelry by getting influenced from other. This copy habit is applicable on many consumer goods available in market.
To sum-up, though people are different in habit, culture and food, they like to wear the trendy cloths which are popular in society. Even consumable items like latest mobile phone etc. are sought after by people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08074534161 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32391949702 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9672226935 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106382234625 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387902193242 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402231012209 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812435243018 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421424535729 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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