Nowadays many people are diagnosed with anorexia what do you think the causes of this are? What can be done to improve the situation?
Anorexia is considered as a mental illness in which people become lean and lose weight owing to the fear of attaining weight. Though medical science provides cure to almost most of the diseases, it has been brought into notice that many people exhibit the symptoms of anorexia. I shall explain the main reasons of this ailment and solution to curb this.
First and foremost reason of anorexia disease is the attitude of society where trimmed people are counted as smart and beautiful. Nowadays it has become a social choice to be lean and shred extra weight resulting people especially young male and female to diet and extra workout. Such irrational desire to be admired and popular leads to various sickness such as physical injury, eating disorders etc. and in some cases people suffer tyrannically. For example, my classmate who was little fatty decided to reduce the weight and embellish herself like a model, stopped taking meals and nutrients, eventually afflicted by bones problems. Another reason is deteriorated taste of food. In these days crops are grown by excessive use of fertilizers and pesticides which results in the bizzare taste. Consequently, people are not able to eat properly and fall in traps of severe diseases.
There are distinct solutions exists in order to fight the anorexia. To begin with, people should change the approach towards defining the beauty standards. If people do not discard the chubby and fat people then desire of being lean will be reduced. Also a control from regulating agencies on the use of fertilizers and other chemicals can be a major step in this area. Government should promote organic farming and some endowment can also be given to farmers who venture in this area. For instance, WHO started to elucidate the advantage of fertilizer less crops and assist farmers to accomplish the same in Africa.
To recapitulate, people are vulnerable to anorexia owing to faulty standards of society and unrealistic desires. Society needs to change the approach and also there is urgent action to promote organic farming to enhance the taste.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09011627907 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57769841862 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9749415639 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1578947368 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200800235275 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554995213336 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429720129028 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112548144693 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499636667301 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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