You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend.
Dear Harry,
It was really amazing to finally spend some time together at your place! I immensely enjoyed an entire week with you! I still remember the delicious pancakes you made - out of your specially chosen ingredients. I can’t thank you enough for it, as they were scrumptious. Also, recall how we were on cloud nine when we won that online chess championship.
Unfortunately, I left my envelope in your room while I was packing my luggage. At that moment, my boss had called me to send him important documents immediately. I placed it on the counter and forgot about it.
But, not to worry, another friend of mine is going to visit your city in the next two days. she’ll be at the market nearby your house, so you can give it to her to return to me. Her phone number is ‘548484846’, you may call her in the evening and give it to her near the market. I hope that doesn’t trouble you much!
Hope to see you soon
Best wishes,
Krishna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t of your specially chosen ingredients. I can’t thank you enough for it, as they ...
^
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...o visit your city in the next two days. she’ll be at the market nearby your house, ...
^^^
Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rouble you much! Hope to see you soon Best wishes, Krishna
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, may, really, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53448275862 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60087269498 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5325158541 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356950512711 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109821286986 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729404130447 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184626730788 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453286540534 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.