Hello Sir,
I am writing this letter to make a complaint regarding food service offered to me, along with my family, last Sunday. Moreover, I want you to take adequate steps to compensate us.
It happened so, on last Sunday, It was the sixteenth birthday of my daughter and we wanted to make it memorable by dining out with the family. As your restaurant is well-known in the area for its cuisines and food menu, we decided to go there for dinner. We ordered some favourite beverages of us with some continental food items.
Firstly, we really got annoyed by the delayed order completion. Secondly, when it came, to our surprise, some of the drinks were not same which we had ordered. Finally, as we started having it, my wife found two streaks of hair in her food, which really spoiled her mood. After that, we left from there immediately and took our dinner somewhere else.
So, I request you to take some actions for the improper service provided by your staff, otherwise, it will damage reputation of your restaurant publicly. Besides this, I want you to offer us a free family dinner package for this weekend.
Hoping to see your reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sir, I am writing this letter to make a compl...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...econdly, when it came, to our surprise, some of the drinks were not same which we had order...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80582524272 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50263316885 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5942326378 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1538461538 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132791282557 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455099949117 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350064421744 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742473516263 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513079634022 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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