You took your family to a near-by restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:
1. Explain why you were at the restaurant
2. Describe the problems
3. write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment from my last experience with your restaurant when I invited my family to have dinner.
I have just gotten my graduate certificate, and I decided to go out with my family to celebrate this very special moment. When I made a spontaneous decision to go out, I could not have better choice than your nearby restaurant. It was amazed to a celebration with all family after the long and hard years of studying.
The restaurant was crowded, but you managed to find us a place for a large huge number of people. However, the ordered meals were not up to our expectation. Some were served cold, and the other were not well-done. We could not also complain instantly due to the non-availability of enough waiters.
I have passed a complain in writing into the complaint’s box. I would therefore request that you investigate this matter with your customer service department, and that you ensure it won`t be repeated from your chef. Similar complains would affect your restaurant reputation.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ity of enough waiters. I have passed a complain in writing into the complaint's bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06842105263 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00059550876 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3999506903 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0769230769 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253992096636 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073697053167 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416335278002 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109226812652 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679017782991 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.