You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag. Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department', you have not received your bag yet.In your letter:-(1) Write the details of incident(2) Inquire the status of your lost bag to

Essay topics:

You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag. Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department', you have not received your bag yet.
In your letter:-
(1) Write the details of incident
(2) Inquire the status of your lost bag to airline
(3) Tell what you want if the bag is not found

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inquire about my lost baggage from the flight journey to New Delhi from Kuwait, on 16th of July. It is green colored with white strips hand bag, at the moment of exit from flight, I forgot to take it with me from baggage compartment above the seat. Immediately I had informed the concern authority of lost and found department of airport and they assure me it will be delivered to my home address within one week.

However, the bag is still not recovered at my end. Therefore, I request you to investigate the matter at the airline end and help me to receive the bag as soon as possible as it was having jewelry items.

As per the rules and regulations of lost materials of your airline, I will demand money in return if the item is not delivered at my door step within 10 days. My flight No. was KJ-150, arrival time 3:30 pm, 16th of July. New Delhi Airport, terminal 3.
I hope you will understand my circumstances and do the needful.

Yours sincerely,
Vishal

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inquire abou...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red to my home address within one week. However, the bag is still not recovered ...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and do the needful. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he needful. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49189189189 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46680814814 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7412093399 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200916866861 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766992094998 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575946011671 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954160115755 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023537606763 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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