You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket.In your letter: say who are you give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter of complaint to you about what happened to me at your supermarket.
I am a citizen of Tehran living near your supermarket on Farhang street. I am one of your permanent customers and I come to your supermarket at least once a week.
Two days ago I was picking fruit in your supermarket. When I wanted to pick fruits, a mirror fell on the side wall and pieces of it hit me and my face was injured.So all my scarfs were full of blood, and one of the staff called her emergency room. I was lucky that the mirror pieces didn't hurt my eyes.
I know you have the mirrors installed so you can see more of the stuff inside the supermarket. But this is a dangerous and old-fashioned thing.I suggest you install CCTV cameras. As a result, you can see all parts of the supermarket, even the outside.This will protect both your property and the lives of people.Because you manage this supermarket and as a result you need to be careful about using and installing the equipment.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Faithfully,
Daniali
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, at least, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7811412144 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60101010101 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1019134471 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368538647818 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144022053354 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930675210229 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190104443697 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105553152693 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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