you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on an holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:
>how you felt about the trip and
>how did you take care of his house in his absence.
Dear Mike,
Hope you are having a great vacation too, I am writing this letter to let you know that I had great time in alwar and wanted to thank you for letting me rent your apartment.
As you are aware that alwar has a historical significance in Rajasthan and has many interesting places where a tourist can visit, i explored all the near by forts, museums and lake.it was an exciting trip especially the Sariska national sanctuary where i took a jungle safari, the safari took us twenty-five kilometres inside the jungle where we saw different animals, apart from this Sariska lake also offered a great scenic view from the hilltop hotel.
However, renting your flat was a great idea, your flat has all the modern amenities and is located in the centre of the city from where it is easy to reach all the tourist spots and the local market. I have got your house cleaned and mopped from the maid as it was dirty and there was a technical issue with the refrigerator which I got it fixed from the local electrician.
I would like to thank you once again for allowing me to stay at your apartment.
warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are having a great vacation too...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a historical significance in Rajasthan and has many interesting places where a ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sting places where a tourist can visit, i explored all the near by forts, museums...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...a tourist can visit, i explored all the near by forts, museums and lake.it was an excit...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly the Sariska national sanctuary where i took a jungle safari, the safari took u...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eat scenic view from the hilltop hotel. However, renting your flat was a great i...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot it fixed from the local electrician. I would like to thank you once again for...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...owing me to stay at your apartment. warm wishes vinshu
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stay at your apartment. warm wishes vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55882352941 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39127273922 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.118514538 44.8134815571 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.0 76.5299724578 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.0 16.8248392259 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251465738508 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113018628062 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671988490048 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148723372259 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576433726561 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 8.37731958763 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.