You work in a company and you need new equipment in order to do your job well. Write to your manager
What equipment you need
Why you need
What you want your manager to do
Dear Maya,
I am working as an estimator in our company and my computer is not working properly as it is too old. Hence, I am writing to you to request for a new computer system so that I can work more productively and efficiently.
I need a new system which should have plenty of storage space. As, my existing system is 10 years old, it often gets stuck and is very slow which is affecting my productivity. I need an updated system which is compatible to our estimation software as, all our drawings come in pdf format. If, I have new computer I can get my work done much faster and can help my team mates with their work.
As there is new tender coming next month. I need the system as soon as possible so that I can work efficiently. I would also like you to give me a budget so that I can look for a new system.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Thank you,
Maya
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| 2021-01-24 | maya ulagappan | 52 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... help my team mates with their work. As there is new tender coming next month. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24117647059 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43419270347 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9488404203 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185947116624 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860457194586 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066995933578 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126359096889 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358419434492 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.