Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic in a safe way.
Famous sports event such as football world cup and other major games are vital to reduce tension between many countries and helps citizens to embrace their patriotism in much healthier way. I completely agree with the aforementioned viewpoint because despite having many controversies and differences among many nations, major sports event such as Olympics and world cup brings countries and people together in a large way.
It is an undeniable fact that many nations around the world wants to be a part of big sports events in every way possible because it can dissolve many political tension among the countries. Also, these events acts like a hub, as it can bring many political leaders under one roof which can create a chance to build friendship among other countries leader. In addition, hosting big games internationally is essential because it can create a chance for other nations to visit their homeland and understand their culture and political status. For example, even though India and China are not in good terms politically, when it comes to sports India is extremely looking forward to send their best sports people to China for the upcoming 2022 Olympics and in fact India’s Prime minister has promised to be there for many games and also meet China's Prime minister and utilise this opportunity to develop friendship with them.
Another fact is that people have always been connected with sports. Sports is an events where an entire nation comes together irrespective of their status, religion and color. Even though many people are divided politically among the nation, when it comes to international games, every one come together to support their county’s sports men which showcases their patriotism. For example, Indian cricket team plays important role in bringing people together. Although India and Pakistan are enemies, but the spirit and faith each citizens have towards their team are surreal. Even though both countries are divided by war, during games neither of the team member nor citizen try to hurt each other, instead they show their patriotism by supporting their team and winning the cup.
Overall, international sports events are essential as it brings the world closer and also gives an opportunity for their citizens to stay united and express their love for their country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Suggestion: to sending
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...unity to develop friendship with them. Another fact is that people have always ...
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Suggestion: an event; events
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20478723404 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53262857589 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515957446809 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7918881318 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.538461538 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205314867932 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800352270893 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699272303335 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145767746224 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542070709559 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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