Some people believe that teenages should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Few opine that young adults must be involved in free community service related work during their leisure time as this has advantage for both children and the society. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement as young children gets involved in these kind of activity, they will value their life and community can also benefit from it because they do not have to spend extra money on salaries.
In today’s day and age most children spend their free time in front of TV and computer games which is deteriorating their health. Instead parents and teachers must encourage these young souls to participate in community work such as cleaning the roads by picking up garbage and helping older and less fortunate people with their needs. This way, they get a chance to meet many new people and have empathy towards other. Also, this will teach them discipline which is an important life skill. In addition, these kind of jobs give them a sense of purpose and be thankful for what they have. For example, I did community service in my local area, where I take senior citizens for walk every weekend and take care of them during medical emergencies which gave me immense satisfaction.
Having said that, it also benefits society, as more millennials volunteers to take up hands on job at free of cost, the local government can spend that money on improving their environment. For example, Ruling bodies spends hundred thousand dollars on salaries which leaves them no money to spare to improve their area. If, teenagers contribute their work on regular basis, government can save some fund and can utilize that money to provide much safer surroundings by fixing security cameras on every street corner. For example, in my area, kids clean roads every weekend and have saved 15,000 rupees every month for 1 year and this money has been utilized to build shelter for homeless people.
In conclusion, children must be exposed to reality and should have sympathy and empathy towards others situation which is utmost important for being human.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ment as young children gets involved in these kind of activity, they will value their life...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...s which is deteriorating their health. Instead parents and teachers must encourage the...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...s an important life skill. In addition, these kind of jobs give them a sense of purpose an...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ment. For example, Ruling bodies spends hundred thousand dollars on salaries which leav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98542274052 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44826797935 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6808225609 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.538461538 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22282613495 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769806253082 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503514576557 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133187004454 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585452869871 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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