You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter,
Give your reason for wanting the job
Explain why you think you can do the job
Describe any relevant experience you have
Dear Sir,
I am Umayal from Chennai and I recently came across your job vacancy advertisement on weekly newsletter for a tour guide position and I am writing to you to express my interest on the same.
I have recently graduated from my high school and I am looking for a weekend job during summer holidays. Also, taking up this job will add immense value to my resume while, I apply for my college. As, I was born and brought up in this town, I am fully aware of the history and heritage of this wonderful town. In addition I can speak 5 language fluently which can be an advantage. Furthermore, I am physically fit and can stay up on my feet all day long.
In addition, I also have prior experience as a school tour guide, where I got to introduce and explain everything about my school to prospective students and parents. Also, I have worked in a small café in downtown which thought me how to interact with customers.
Hence, I am very certain that I will be a right fit for this position. I am also attaching my resume and other personal details. Hope this will convince you to choose me as a tour guide.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you,
Maya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...and heritage of this wonderful town. In addition I can speak 5 language fluently which c...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, look, may, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45412844037 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57831219925 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.181486292 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6923076923 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208109525192 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755255694831 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631568443186 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114252679737 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661064268543 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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