Coins and paper money will soon be completely replaced by credit and bank cards. Eventually we will have a cashless society which will be safer and more convenient for everyone. Do you agree or disagree
Physical form of money are substituted by debit and credit cards. In the long run, cash will be alienated and transactions will become much safer and easy for all. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement as online transaction will have the record of onus income and expenditure and also the practice of bribery will be reduced drastically.
Cash and coins have been the way to purchase any commodity and services in this world for centuries now. Even though every coin and cash notes are unique with their own serial number, it is indeed difficult to carry large sum of money. There is a constant fear of robbery among people who carry money physically. Also, another concern about cash is that, there is a lot of fake notes circulating in every country which jeopardize a country’s economy in a large way. Furthermore, in many countries, cash are used for bribery which can be an unaccountable income. For instance, in my country India, the government demonetized all currency in 2017 and during this process, it was recorded that 60 billion dollars were unaccounted money and people predominantly used to give those cash as bribe.
Now, to protect citizens from any theft or illegal activity, our country is digitizing everything. This way, all money is accountable and people can have track of their expense. Also, it is more convenient to carry and is extremely secure with passcode which assures a person that their money is safe. In addition, transferring money through online has also become much easier as, it takes only few minutes. As a result, people do not have to wait in long ques and fill in forms. For instance, earlier In India we used to pay road toll by cash only, but now under digital India concept, we ought to pay our toll through EZpass which is an online top up card that scans the barcode of the EZpass card. This way government can have the record of our payment and no one can evade from paying toll.
In conclusion, it is worth moving towards cashless society as it assures safety and security of onus hard earned money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a large way" with adverb for "large"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ry which jeopardize a country’s economy in a large way. Furthermore, in many countries, cash a...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'tracked'.
Suggestion: tracked
...oney is accountable and people can have track of their expense. Also, it is more conv...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ough online has also become much easier as, it takes only few minutes. As a result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79888268156 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5909925527 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3513667985 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253213481923 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075358029067 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707606336859 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155504342497 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106403761695 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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