You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing
visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter
give your reasons for wanting the job
explain why you think you can do the job
• describe any relevant experience you have
Dear sir or madam,
This is pouria Mirzaei writing. After seeing your
advertisement in a newspaper, I would like to express my anxiety about joining your organization.
Not until a year ago did I quit my last job which was pretty related to the tourist sector; therefore, I was looking for a Suitable job, nearly close to my preference, for a long time.
My great enthusiasm and interest in speaking
and guiding foreigners is the Convincing illustration about this subject.
Adding more details, I had been working as a tour guide as a part_time job while I was studying geography at University, therefore, I am aware of the ups and downs all around this job. moreover, you can Count me on regarding speaking English and long_time conversation without hesitation with English Tourist, fluently.
Having mentioned that I had an experience in this job, I find it easy to communicate with tourists ؛because٫I am so social and friendly as I have been socializing with them ever since I quit my job, therefore, I can attract a lot of attention toward your organization.
you're grateful.
Pour a mirzaei
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
... the ups and downs all around this job. moreover, you can Count me on regarding speaking...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of attention toward your organization. youre grateful. Pour a mirzaei
^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youre
...tion toward your organization. youre grateful. Pour a mirzaei
^^^^^
Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...tion toward your organization. youre grateful. Pour a mirzaei
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02688172043 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03576876765 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2229916861 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225877645347 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779917105714 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054915551884 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815402675569 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553013667072 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.