Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While some people are of the view that young people must participate in voluntary work during their free hours as it is advantageous for both the society and teenagers; others do not support this view. I completely disagree with the view that children should focus on their studies rather than taking part in such activities. In this essay, I will present compelling reasons to support my view.
To begin with, some parents believe that it is not mandatory for children to work during their leisure hours. Admittedly, studies play a paramount role in a child’s life as their career is dependent upon it; by participating in voluntarily services for the society can affect their academics, and they may not be able to excel. To cite an example, if a school-going student works over the weekend in some old age home, then he/she may not find enough time to study and prone to fail their exams. Hence, it becomes evident why some do not are not in favour of children working during their free time.
Furthermore, school-going children already have a busy schedule and doing unpaid work would further add another responsibility. They need time to relax and focus on their hobbies or play with friends. Spending time on activities which young people prefer is a source of entertainment for them. The New York Times, for example, published that hobbies allow child to develop valuable skills which they do not learn at school and positively influences their mental well-being.
To conclude, some think that unpaid community work is mandatory for adolescents. I believe that such work should not be forced upon students as their personal development is more important than anything else.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02135231317 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6850527912 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2963713784 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295455035919 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104917416464 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531673779398 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178129594724 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267334576434 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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