You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
-describe the problem with the equipment
-explain how this problem is affecting your job
-say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to highlight some technical problem with a Printer model no XD2345 which I recently purchased from your shop last week. Allow me to explain in detail.
To elucidate there are multiple technical problems with the printer. Firstly the printer has a faulty power cable which creates problems in starting and shutting down the machine. Secondly, there is always an error stating low cartridge on the front LCD panel and lastly, there are frequent papers jams in the printer. Although most of these technical problems are temporarily fixed after restarting the printer, however, the power failure is more difficult to diagnose and fix. Since I work from home, therefore, I had purchased this printer for scanning and printing official documents hence with these erratic problems my work is getting affected severely.
Hence I would request you to first send a technician immediately to fix these issues. Additionally, if these issues persist then I would request a free replacement of the printer since it is covered under warranty.
I look forward to your immediate resolution.
Yours sincerely
Saad
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to highlight s...
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Line 4, column 661, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s my work is getting affected severely. Hence I would request you to first send ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...work is getting affected severely. Hence I would request you to first send a tec...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... immediate resolution. Yours sincerely Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25136612022 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68275403639 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9037798022 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226685231268 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869394587131 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634037009341 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118952682025 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627795633007 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.