You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to let you know about a problem with the computer I purchased from your shop recently. I am one of your frequent customers.
Last week, I purchased a computer from your computer shop. Now, it’s keyboard which is not working properly. Whenever the shift key is pressed it gets stuck, which makes it difficult to type capital letters and other special characters on the keyboard.
My job is getting highly affected because of this problem. It takes up lots of time correcting the error caused by turning on and off the ‘Caps Lock’ button. I am a freelance website content writer; my work is getting affected by this shift button malfunction. I have to complete my tasks on time, my deadline is nearing, which is on 28th.
So, I would like to request you that send one of your technicians to my home so that he can repair the computer. If you think it will take some time to repair then please send a spare working keyboard so that I can continue my work on time.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Sam
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74345549738 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59425008319 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5695406695 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238111450706 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778713318376 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601050026926 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122051263676 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558311628662 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.