You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Road New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to express my concern regarding work at the offshore head office of our company. Being a Chief Financial officer of the company, I want to work in the work culture of head office so that I could enhance the horizon of knowledge and equip myself with versatile skills of highly advanced epoch.
Even though I would be at foreign land, I would definitely present virtually and supervise all the working. Gladly, I have also trained one of my internee who would handle all tasks. As you know it is the beginning of the financial year, thus the burden of the work is quite light .Further, I assure you that I would accomplish all the pending tasks when I would return..
Being the head of Human Resource Department, you could recommend my name along with my work history to the higher management for such short term transfer. It would be highly appreciable if you persuade the higher authorities.I reaffirm that this posting would eventually be conductive for the company in achieving the new heights of success.
I am anticipating a positive response form your side.
Yours sincerely,
Navdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the working. Gladly, I have also trained one of my internee who would handle all ...
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...ll the pending tasks when I would return.. Being the head of Human Resource Dep...
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... I am anticipating a positive response form your side. Yours sincerely, Navdeep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93236714976 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59772249303 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4311136024 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284319300852 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104324035933 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559849290081 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142839421234 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550202191949 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.