Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request your reference about my temporary work in the head office of our company. Becuase I saw the announcement mail in our mailsystem which recruited data scientists for a program in our headquarter.
The program lasting for six months focuses on developing a credit card fraud detection system, which requires machine learning and system design skills employees according to the mail. I think you read that, too. My background is suitable with this postion. Moreover, as you encouraged us to communicate more with the head office in the beginning of this year, this is a golden chance for me and our branch to show our appearance in front of the CEO and board memebers.
Besides, our project has been finished last week, which only needs for maintanance in the future. Thus with your agreements ,I can work there, at the same time, I will synchronize the current project with my team memebers remotely.
I would like you can consider my request. Then I will be really appreciated that if you can write a reference letter to the head office for me.
Thank you for your assistance in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Tony
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ly needs for maintanance in the future. Thus with your agreements ,I can work there,...
^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in the future. Thus with your agreements ,I can work there, at the same time, I wi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88834951456 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67347069651 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0366449232 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288427989632 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919051164114 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074985672792 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158019253221 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041187359954 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.