you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for him/her help in arranging it
Dear Sam,
I am writing this letter to show my intentions to work at company’s headquarter in London for next six months. I have been working here for past 6 years and I have gained diversified experience including quality assurance, systems and processes, customer insights analysis and most importantly product development. I am interested to work on a project named “ Project Automation” . Project scope is around automation of routine manual tasks such as such as maintaining excel sheets and filling lengthy forms. I think myself capable of working in that project in the capacity of project manager and would like to utilize my expertise for successful project execution. I am looking forward to experience the extended exposure and visibility by working at the head office.
During my absence, I have aligned Mr. Kim to handle my tasks; so that routine work do not get affected. Furthermore, I shall be available remotely for any urgent discussion or query. I request you make required arrangements in this regard such as securing management approval, accommodation arrangements and intimations to project team at the headquarter.
Expecting your swift and outright response.
Yours Faithfully,
Lene
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I am writing this letter to show my inte...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ct named ' Project Automation' . Project scope is around automation of r...
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Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'such as'.
Suggestion: such as
...ound automation of routine manual tasks such as such as maintaining excel sheets and filling le...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ents and intimations to project team at the headquarter. Expecting your swift and outright re...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d outright response. Yours Faithfully, Lene
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43455497382 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1912253557 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69109947644 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7203222683 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3636363636 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228338476585 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841200760582 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488461770049 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122005882629 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533009329166 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.