You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it,
Dear Paul,
Hope this letter finds you hale & hearty. I intend to write this letter to seek your support for arranging my relocation to the company’s headquarter in Norway. As you are well aware that I am working on a project named “Crowdsourcing” for which there is a dedicated team working in Norway office already. I have planned to scale-up my project, in that perspective; I need to execute end to end product revamp of one of the most revenue-generating product called “ Ring Back Tune” based on crowdsourcing methodology. I shall be taking on the job training and learn their way of work.
I assure you that during my 6 months rotation to the headquarter office, my current work responsibilities will be duly taken care by one of our colleague who has agreed to extend his support. None the less, I shall be executing some of my tasks from the head office myself as well.
I look forward to your usual support for raising my request to the senior management and in securing due approvals in this regard.
I shall be greatly obliged. looking forward to your outright response.
Yours Truly,
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are that I am working on a project named 'Crowdsourcing' for which ther...
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Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...b training and learn their way of work. I assure you that during my 6 months rot...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n their way of work. I assure you that during my 6 months rota...
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Line 17, column 50, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...you that during my 6 months rotation to the headquarter office, my current work responsibilitie...
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Line 17, column 193, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Nonetheless
...e who has agreed to extend his support. None the less, I shall be executing some of my tasks ...
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Line 33, column 29, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...egard. I shall be greatly obliged. looking forward to your outright response. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11398963731 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24709947663 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663212435233 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0702094232 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257284884413 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905284092657 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638466369992 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120010550783 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747746292525 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.