You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I Prabhpreet Kaur, senior sales manager in Hamilton company for the past 3 years. I am writing this letter to express my interest to work in company’s Head quarters in America for 6 months.
As you are aware that our company is planning to expand the global reach of the product. I would like to work in company’s Head Quarters for 6 months so that I can enhance my skills and understand the global market trends of the product. Additionally, it will also help me to get the knowledge of market policies, rules regulations and tariffs.
I have talked to Shweta junior sales manager and she has agreed to take up my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I will check my e-mails and will be available for emergency calls. Once I get back to work, I would endeavour to work extra hours to catch up on anything I missed
I would need your support to get the necessary approvals and if you could assist me to make arrangements for the accommodations
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours Faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: HEAD_QUARTERS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'headquarters'?
Suggestion: Headquarters
...s my interest to work in company's Head quarters in America for 6 months. As you are a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ead quarters in America for 6 months. As you are aware that our company is plann...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: HEAD_QUARTERS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'headquarters'?
Suggestion: Headquarters
... I would like to work in company's Head Quarters for 6 months so that I can enhance my s...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a hours to catch up on anything I missed I would need your support to get the nec...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou Yours Faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79347826087 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97188702281 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.721742262 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280755524341 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107801673696 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985520893854 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138044859489 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564446879289 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.