You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager, in your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Mr Smith,
I hope you are doing well.
I am writing to tell you about a workshop in communication skills held by the Rank institute, which i believe would have a great benefit to my performance in the company.
The course will be the next month for three consecutive days in Grand hotel from 12 to 3 pm. It will be led by Mr Jones who is one of the top experts in this field.
I would be greatfull if the company help me in tuition which is 300 Dollars, also I appreciate to give me the mentioned period as an off time to allow me to attend this event.
Finally, I am sure this training will improve my knowledge and strengthen my pursuance techniques which will definitely enhance the sales of our products. Furthermore, I am planning to pass these skills to my college to enhance their competence.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Smith, I hope you are doing well. I am writi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Mr Smith, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you about a worksho...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...kills held by the Rank institute, which i believe would have a great benefit to m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nefit to my performance in the company. The course will be the next month for th...
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Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51875 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69634445824 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6512509149 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214462428417 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837549230183 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457240633365 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942797275715 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346496349897 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.