You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods

Essay topics:

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.

Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inquire about few products that I want to buy.One of my friend recommend to me about you.

I want to buy Sony LED,AC and blinder. Hopefully these all products will be available in your stock.I want to visit in your shop but before that I want to know the product availability in your shop . Could you send me more information about product like size of product ,prize of product ,Color of product. Also I would like to know how you will deliver the product in my house. If the delivery service is available. Will it be covered in product cost ? Or Need to pay extra delivery charges.You can share all information on my whats app number or you can send me a mail.

If the products will be available in your stock.I will visit in your shop on Sunday at 4pm. If you want to sell these products before my desired visiting time . Do let me know about this as well. Although I am little busy this week still I will try to visit according to your desired day and time.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks,

ABC

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ll visit in your shop on Sunday at 4pm. If you want to sell these products before ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32983799592 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54358974359 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6768422949 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9230769231 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186500303634 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725091968095 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567580105797 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109415629574 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467230460752 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.