You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request for some assistance. I have recently shifted to your neighbouring town due to work. It has been extremely hectic with setting up everything as my work commences next week. I would like to purchase a few electrical appliances from your shop and would really appreciate if you could provide me with some information regarding them.
I would like to place order for a geyser, though every house is facilitated with a geyser, the geyser at my place is pretty old and the water is not warm enough to work with. I have consulted with a mechanic and he recommended replacing the geyser rather than fix it, as the former option would be more cost efficient. In addition, I would also like to purchase a bedside lamp as the lighting here is not sufficient for reading purpose. If the items are not available at your store, could you please place an order on my behalf?
Furthermore, I would like to know the possible prices of these items so that I can include them in my budget. As I have recently started living here, I have yet to be familiar with the standard of living here. Therefore, knowing the prices will help me deal with my daily expenses.
I would also like to know how long would you be able to hold the products for me? I am assuming it would take at least a week to receive the products if they are not available at your store. It would also take some time to visit your shop to pick up the goods sometime next week.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Ammy Brens
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... house is facilitated with a geyser, the geyser at my place is pretty old and the...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... water is not warm enough to work with. I have consulted with a mechanic and he r...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48096885813 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52780422175 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0280178691 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1764705882 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262076300039 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078175087577 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610683544888 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141784218533 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667167074493 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.