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Essay topics:

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food

Dear Betty,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I will be visiting Florida next week. My flight is on 16th April 2020.

I need some advice on a few things. Firstly, I wish to purchase some gifts for your family, but I am clueless of their preferences. I know you love shawls so I already have them packed and I would be delighted to know about the things Monica and Archie likes.

I would also be interested in a tour of your city such as popular destinations, museums, art exhibitions and clubs. Although, I have conducted some research over the internet and found that summer clothing will be sufficient but your suggestions on the matter will be genuinely appreciated.

Lastly, as you are undoubtedly aware of how I adore a variety cuisines, please prepare a list of restaurants that we can visit.

I am eagerly looking forward to visiting you and your family.

Yours sincerely

Mary Smith

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63803680982 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60080735126 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9697491803 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7272727273 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237771767105 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869500058074 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519575840881 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130713695065 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489732881548 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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