A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Samara,
I am excited to visit your country and meet you. I am writing to ask for a few details regarding the trip about the visit before I leave.
So, I want to know three pieces of information.
Firstly, as this is the first time meeting your family, I want to impress them by giving them a gift as a token of love. So please suggest what I should bring for them. Even if you do not tell me, I will bring some useful items to you and your family.
Secondly, I wanted to go and see the country for a long time but never happened to explore the country. Now that I am coming, I have included a short trip in my itinerary so, tell me about the weather conditions at Christmas. and advise on what kind of clothing I should wear.
Lastly, my foodie soul is craving for cultural cuisine, therefore please tell me more about food like what is fast food and where is the world-famous dish available. Is it near to your city or we will have to plan further?
I cannot wait to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Joy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ut the weather conditions at Christmas. and advise on what kind of clothing I shoul...
^^^
Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t wait to hear from you. Best wishes, Joy
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28205128205 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2823681716 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2690654614 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2307692308 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220490165595 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741550150059 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703603483945 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108063360908 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080558536445 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.