Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion
Hosting international sport events are extremely prestigious for a nation. While some believe that this will be beneficial others think there are more drawbacks. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints before providing an opinion.
There are numerous benefits of hosting large scale events. There will be an influx of tourism due to people related to the event such as visitors, players, broadcasters, officials etc which will in turn boost the economy of the country. In addition, government will improve the pre-existing infrastructure of the city such as airports and road as well as build new ones like building new gyms and swimming pools. Hence, there will be a surge in employment rates as more people would be needed in tasks like construction and advertisements. More earnings can be generated by selling tickets for the event and traditional products.
However, there are several drawbacks as well to hosting such events. Government will spend a large percentage of national revenue to organize such affairs as well as build the new infrastructures which fall into disuse after the event has ended. Due to this, the amount spent will be recovered from the citizens in the form of tax. Additionally, traffic congestion in the hosting city will increase thereby raising the levels of air pollution.
To reiterate, although the nation will be greatly benefitted from the promotions of hosting such large scale events, I strongly believe that the drawbacks outweighs the merits and instead of hosting such events government could take steps to improve the lives of people in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are extremely prestigious for a nation. While some believe that this will be benefici...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
... the merits and instead of hosting such events government could take steps to improve ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22868217054 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82735665885 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6496787583 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180208270878 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07214931751 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632878090605 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132123137076 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105763292275 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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