You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inquire about the Network Design seminar to be held next month in Singapore. Although I have attended short-term courses in past however I am keen to attend this seminar as it will help me in designing link budgets for the network but as well do the cost optimization for the network.
Since the advert published in the newspaper was brief and did not mention the detailed information. Hence I would need the information about the dates, content and the cost of the program. Hence I request you to send these details as I need to take prior approval from my line manager to attend this event. Additionally please clarify if the accommodation is covered in the cost of the program as I would need to do an advance booking since the accommodation is very expensive in Singapore.
Looking forward to your earliest response.
Yours sincerely
Saud
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inquire abo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the cost optimization for the network. Since the advert published in the newspa...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...d not mention the detailed information. Hence I would need the information about the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s, content and the cost of the program. Hence I request you to send these details as ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...m my line manager to attend this event. Additionally please clarify if the accommodation is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur earliest response. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81168831169 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75616269258 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9553591712 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211467910519 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758763928251 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661934032418 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101113449354 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754628253919 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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