you would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Manager,
My name is samvedna Puri and currently, designation of Deputy manager in Sales Department is being held by me. I am inscribing this epistle to notify you regarding my willingness to join the seminar which is going to be conducted at head office level in Canada. Being departmental head of sales section, this seminar will surely impart me necessary sale promotion strategies which would assist in enhancing the marketing skills .
Since, the whole incharge of this exciting and knowlegable event is under your preview, therefore it world be grate if you could apprise me the scheduled dates and drafted days of the meet. This would bestow me with ample of time to organise my work in advance and able to take off from work accordingly.
Even though, I have already attended many seminars in the same country but this place yet not so familar to me. Thus, kindly inform me all the accomodation related cost as well as the routes associated to temporary place and it would be highly appreciable at your part.
I anticipate to hear from your side soon.
Your Sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...assist in enhancing the marketing skills . Since, the whole incharge of this ex...
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Suggestion:
...cost as well as the routes associated to temporary place and it would be highly a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld be highly appreciable at your part. I anticipate to hear from your side soon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65288520473 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679144385027 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2454755606 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141352360788 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526191427053 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404354855582 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748756755341 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471348135347 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.