You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Samvedna Puri, dweller of Haward Street, North London. I am inscribing this epistle on the behalf of whole group to express disatisfaction in respect of unacceptable services at your restaurant. Being a marketing team at 'Sudan' corporation, we have to meet our foreign delegates on daily basis for this purpose our company has selected your place two months ago.
Undoubtedly, this place has a goodwill among the localites but meager food serving facilities are ultimatly deliorating its reputation. Even though in every visit we had splendid services, case was not same with bygone day as your new employed dealing staff lack at adequate communication skills with custmers and unpolite behaviour worse the scenario. Moreover, served food was not as per the given order as we ordered for vegeterian cuisines and got non-veg food items which was so disrespectful.
It world be high appreciable if you could personally attend our orders and follow the cooking instructions because such business meetings are very imperative for company. Otherwise, neglegence at your part would force me to look for other place.
Anticipate a prompt actions from your end.
Your Sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...for other place. Anticipate a prompt actions from your end. Your Sincerely, Samv...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8701643723 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.779487179487 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7895236817 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110841387957 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388393289023 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219406701821 0.0603063233224 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059218925089 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192471866694 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...for other place. Anticipate a prompt actions from your end. Your Sincerely, Samv...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8701643723 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.779487179487 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7895236817 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110841387957 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388393289023 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219406701821 0.0603063233224 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059218925089 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192471866694 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.