You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recent meal we had at your restaurant.
Every week on Thursday, we have team members dinner at your restaurant from the past 9 months. We were very happy with your food and services.
However, during our last meal on March 21st, the service we received was not up to the mark. There were many problems. To being with, the soup we ordered was cold. Another issue was the salad was not fresh. It seems that the ingredients were stale and overly salted to curb the taste of staleness. Lastly, the service was very slow, even though we had reserved the table well in advance. When I asked the waiter the reason for the delay, his attitude was not only quite impolite but also he did not give a proper answer.
I would recommend that you check with your kitchen staff since they are not doing a job properly to ensure that the food that is being served is up to the mark and quality is meeting the price you are charging. Lastly, you must train your serving staff to be more polite.
My team will closely check all the services you will be proving in our next group dinner. If there is any shortcomings, we will be forced to change our venue for dinner, and you will lose a loyal customer.
I hope you will take corrective actions to ensure this problem is not repeated.
Your faithfully,
Ab
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
... the mark. There were many problems. To being with, the soup we ordered was cold. Ano...
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Line 11, column 94, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are any shortcomings'?
Suggestion: there are any shortcomings
...be proving in our next group dinner. If there is any shortcomings, we will be forced to change our venue ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.48453608247 281% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51394422311 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28585982866 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4732063967 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8125 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206276061694 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624322310831 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453296774109 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10864158632 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436662935183 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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