You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear,...
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear manager,
I am writing this letter to complaint about the last meal I had with my group in your restaurant. Also, I would like to give my own advise to overcome past mistake and provide best service.
As you know, my company's meeting always held at your place. Last week, during dinner time we ordered non-spicy food for our special client. First of all, service was so delayed as there were only 4 team members working. After that, when they prepared food, they messed up our order with other table which ordered same kind of meal. So, we got spicy instead of non-spicy which resulted in sickness for our client and we lost the project.
I totally understand it was just a mistake that happened. To ensure successful discussion in next month in your restaurant, I would suggest to increase the staff so that they can divide work and provide excellent service to customers. Servers should start marking food before serving it.
I hope you would think about my suggestion and will make our next meeting successful.
Thank you.
Your sincerely,
Jain Mehta.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, kind of, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35954703128 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711956521739 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4610997344 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185125273939 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070383600869 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716320611528 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977392211733 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351455284434 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.