u should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
• Explain when and how long you will be in town.
• Ask whether you can stay at their home.
• Offer to pay for yourself.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Hello! I am at pink of my health and hope you're sailing at the same boat. I am penning down this epistle to inform you that I would be on a short visit in your city in the first week of the following month. Gladly, I am promoted to the designation of Chief Financial Officer in my company, so they have arranged an orientation program in London to sharp my traits.
Even though my employer has arranged a fabulous place for my accommodation, I want to spend time with you and revive the nostalgic memories of our childhood. If you don't mind, could I stay with you for 10 days at your place?
Frankly speaking, I would not be mind if you charge from me for such accommodation. Please let me in advance what amount I should reimburse to you and its mode of payment. Hope you have ameliorated your culinary skills, otherwise we have to rely on fast food. During the free time , we can also go for a excursion.
I am anticipating a prompt response from your side. Take care and stay healthy.
Best Wishes,
Navdeep Puri
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...llo! I am at pink of my health and hope youre sailing at the same boat. I am penning ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...algic memories of our childhood. If you dont mind, could I stay with you for 10 days...
^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u and its mode of payment. Hope you have ameliorated your culinary skills, otherw...
^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... rely on fast food. During the free time , we can also go for a excursion. I a...
^^
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fast food. During the free time , we can also go for a excursion. I am anticip...
^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing the free time , we can also go for a excursion. I am anticipating a promp...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, frankly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44973544974 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6050717633 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7911595231 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252323170842 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887872352474 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746817014478 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144885176108 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330182912108 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.