Dear Gargi,
How are you doing? Hope you are in best of health and spirits. I have been given a short assignment in Hongkong next month, so was wondering if I could stay at your place for 2 days? Initially, my company had planned to book a hotel near the airport, but I requested them to hold on for a while.
Firstly, I have been really missing our conversations and evening sessions in Singapore. It would be a great catch up session for both of us. Moreover, I will be working only few hours a day and the rest of the time I can spend with you, especially the evenings galavanting and city hopping. Although am aware of the space constraint over there but rest assured I will be quite comfortable as compared to staying in a hotel. Also, your place is very accessible with respect to my workplace and airport. Additionally, we don't waste any time as I am travelling for a very short span of time.
Lastly, since this is my official trip and I will be reimbursed for all my expenses during my stay in Hongkong, I insist that you should consider me as a paying guest for these two days. I would love to pay all the bills as it would be quite a fair deal. I am looking forward for my trip and meeting you after a very long time. Let me know whether it is a viable option for you as well.
Lots of love and awaiting your reply
Warm wishers,
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...workplace and airport. Additionally, we dont waste any time as I am travelling for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, moreover, really, so, well, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29343629344 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46642304704 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1265796725 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264834124828 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839225602277 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437408304432 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157910804177 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394282643619 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.