Dear Pooja,
Hope you are in best of health and spirits. I'm so excited about our short getaway to the countryside this weekend. So wanted to share a few details with regards to the arrangements I have already done. Also, there are some activities to consider that requires prior bookings. Finally, wanted to ask you if you are keen to hire a coach rather than driving down ourselves?
Firstly, I have already booked a chalet with sea view in the countryside. The views are breathtaking that I could not resist the temptation and immediately proceeded with the bookings for both of us. Although we are going to share the place, but there are two levels in it to ensure privacy at the same time. Thus, am sure you would love the accommodation too.
Furthermore, there is a strawberry farm in the vicinity where we can go and pluck strawberries of our own choice. They actually give us15 minutes inside the farm to roam around as we please. Its an interesting way of selling strawberries. If you think that's not your choice of activity then we can consider water sports. Along with the accommodation, they have provided some discount vouchers to enjoy parasailing but for that we should be ready as early as 6am. Let me know your preference so that I can book accordingly.
Finally, If you also desire to enjoy lush green tree plantations during our drive maybe I can suggest to book a coach instead. Thus, I shall leave this task for you to decide and make necessary arrangements.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon and see you this weekend!
Lots of love
Nur Amirah
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest booking'.
Suggestion: suggest booking
...lantations during our drive maybe I can suggest to book a coach instead. Thus, I shall leave th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75539568345 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68929100574 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.36753522 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4444444444 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266112312732 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712170487957 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599105302098 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130596476903 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460264765185 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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