ou want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Explain why you are selling the television.
Describe the television.
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Ram,
Hello, I am at pink of my health and hope! you 're sailing at same boat. Gladly, I have been promoted to post of Chief Financial office and transferred to an offshore project. As company has decided to deploy me to its Head quarter based in Canada, thus I am selling out my all belongings.
You know that I bought 56"inch Smart LED of LG Brand on last year. It supports all the multimedia applications through mobile and it can also play high resolution videos such as 4 K videos. Moreover, it is under warranty period which would expire by the end of year 2021.If I talk about its condition, it is just brand new and I've not used it much.
Frankly speaking, I received several bids regarding this TV on OLX, but last month you told me to buy a Tv so I aspire to sell it to you. You can come on following Sunday to have a look on this TV. Don't be panic with the mode of payment, you can also remit money in small installments.
Take care and stay healthy.
With warm regards,
Navdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...lo, I am at pink of my health and hope! you re sailing at same boat. Gladly, I have...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d transferred to an offshore project. As company has decided to deploy me to its ...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...ch would expire by the end of year 2021.If I talk about its condition, it is just ...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...its condition, it is just brand new and Ive not used it much. Frankly speaking, ...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not used it much. Frankly speaking, I received several bids regarding this TV...
^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t much. Frankly speaking, I received several bids regarding this TV on OLX, b...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: LOOK_WATCH[3]
Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
Suggestion: watch
... can come on following Sunday to have a look on this TV. Dont be panic with the mode...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...owing Sunday to have a look on this TV. Dont be panic with the mode of payment, you ...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the mode of payment, you can also remit money in small installments. Take car...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thy. With warm regards, Navdeep Puri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35602094241 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46638539846 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717277486911 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8414211967 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120625881266 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398617883524 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416282462168 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573081015114 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565693510044 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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