You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
• Explain when and how long you will be in town.
• Ask whether you can stay at their home.
• Offer to pay for yourself.
Dear Vikas,
I hope you are doing well. I'm excited to tell you that I'll be coming to Vancouver for a business trip in the coming next month.
I'll be staying for ten days in Vancouver on this trip for my firm. The planned dates are 1st May 2021 to 10th May 2021. My flight will depart to your place around early morning on May 1st.
Since it's a long time and we haven't seen each other, it would be great to spend some quality time with you and your family. If that's not too much ask, Will it be possible if I can stay at your place during the time of my company business trip.
Moreover, it would be great if you'll show me around the city. I would love to pay for the services of food, shopping, or clubbing while you'll take me around to show the City.
I hope to see you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank Bhasin
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ar Vikas, I hope you are doing well. Im excited to tell you that Ill be coming ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...iness trip in the coming next month. Ill be staying for ten days in Vancouver on...
^^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ound early morning on May 1st. Since its a long time and we havent seen each oth...
^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ay 1st. Since its a long time and we havent seen each other, it would be great to s...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ality time with you and your family. If thats not too much ask, Will it be possible i...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...trip. Moreover, it would be great if youll show me around the city. I would love t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...es of food, shopping, or clubbing while youll take me around to show the City. I h...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1875 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.89072572046 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0143382504 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9090909091 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233210592632 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808230210569 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052415433174 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122209501031 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571717384724 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ar Vikas, I hope you are doing well. Im excited to tell you that Ill be coming ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...iness trip in the coming next month. Ill be staying for ten days in Vancouver on...
^^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ound early morning on May 1st. Since its a long time and we havent seen each oth...
^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ay 1st. Since its a long time and we havent seen each other, it would be great to s...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ality time with you and your family. If thats not too much ask, Will it be possible i...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...trip. Moreover, it would be great if youll show me around the city. I would love t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...es of food, shopping, or clubbing while youll take me around to show the City. I h...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1875 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.89072572046 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0143382504 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9090909091 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233210592632 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808230210569 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052415433174 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122209501031 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571717384724 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.