More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Health should be the first and foremost focus of every individual in their lives because I think a healthy person can make a meaningful contribution to society. However, In this decade, with the advancement of technology health has become a major issue amongst people, especially youngsters. It has been observed that many developed nations have overweighted children as compared to less developed countries. In this essay, I will determine the main causes and effects of this problem in detail.
Apparently, modernization and westernization are to be blamed for this universal phenomenon. However, it begets harrowing upshot on modern society. To begin with, in the past, most of the youth were involved in outdoor activities because there were no technological innovations that have build interest in today's juveniles. These interests are computer games, PlayStations, Smartphones, and Xbox which utilize the leisure time of children that could be used in physical activities like outdoor sports such as cricket, football, badminton, cycling, and aerobics. Because of sitting in homes, there has been obesity observed among today's youngsters, especially in developed countries. Besides, it has also affected the metabolism rate of individuals as they are more involved in indoor activities using technological devices.
Another reason for increasing overweighted children is junk food. Higher intake of unhealthy foods affects the person's body which begets serious health-related issues such as heart problems, obesity, diabetes, and other chronic illness. For instance, a recent survey conducted by BCC says that over-consumption of unhealthy meals like street food has causes obesity problems, especially in youngsters, and has become an alarming trend. Therefore, it is essential to follow healthy balanced meals for everyone to reduce the effect of obesity in developed countries.
To conclude, although overweight problems among children in developed nations might have become a serious problem, it can be handled by governments and parents of these adolescents by taking appropriate actions and diverting children towards physical activities and healthy meals in their lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, however, so, therefore, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75384615385 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03964183502 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4465638233 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204172818013 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710557590189 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678159244658 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128335101476 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437895491989 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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