You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Mr. John,
Hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter regarding the seminar that is going to held in France. I came to know about this event from one of my colleague, but I am not aware about the details. I am quite interested to attend this knowledgeable discussion that will be delivered by experts.
It will be a great help if you can share the exact date and timings of the event with me. I think, that this program is regarding the team management, and this is my area of interest. I do not want to miss this golden opportunity. Just want to make sure about the stay and total cost that I have to pay to be a part of this event.
You can share all the information related to this seminar through an email. I will be waiting for your prompt reply.
Thank you for your time and help.
Yours Sincerely,
Karamdeep Kaur
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- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 wor 70
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... regarding the seminar that is going to held in France. I came to know about this ev...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., but I am not aware about the details. I am quite interested to attend this know...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36477987421 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38912597953 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.099568962 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.8333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150536422379 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05912152149 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666331839433 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931730577447 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039440295589 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.