Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week.
Write to your friend. In your letter
congratulate your friend
tell her when you will be returning home
ask when you could drop in to meet her and the baby
Annie,
Congratulation for stepping into Motherhood.
Oh my god, I am currently not in town to celebrate this awesome situation. I can’t wait for a week to return to our city to meet you and baby. It is a long wait for you to see the little one, isn’t it? Hey I am so excited to see you both. It will be a brand new experience for me to hold a new-born baby. By the way, I came to know it was a normal delivery while most of them gives cesarean delivery. Indeed, it all your effort doing some pregnancy exercises. I am currently on a business trip to Hawaii, will be back in a week. Therefore, I will definitely able to meet you on February 7th at your home. Perhaps, you will have to go to the same hospital for baby vaccinations. So, tell me when will be the good time to meet you and baby on next week.
Do you think you need anything from Johnson & Johnson’s biggest baby shop showroom from Hawaii? Do let me know to grab some for you and the little one.
Eagerly waiting to meet you soon.
Yours lovingly,
Sayu
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, while, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26903553299 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.497795171 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7838910164 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.5625 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332811983619 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108705038773 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764787847541 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143021608158 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111594695628 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.