You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:•explain why you are writing•express concern

Essay topics:

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

• explain why you are writing

• express concern about the missing card

• ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir,

I have been asked for a receipt of acceptance through a letter from your bank for receiving a new card while it was not there in the envelope. I would like to alarm it to you to take an immediate action so that my new card is not being misused. Besides, I would like to know what was the actual purpose was so that I could be stay aware.

I hold a saving account for almost a decade in your bank at Hammersmith, London branch and my account number is 1009443748520. Recently, I have received a courier from your bank containing an instruction letter about a new debit card and a complimentary offer coupons. I was wondering the actual reason for receiving a letter from the bank about a ATM card but there is no card inside it. Is the card missed or stolen on its way to reach me? I am afraid, if my card gets mishandled while there are many bank robberies happens to the customers hold lump sum of money in the account. I demand you to take this matter serious to investigate about the missing card. As well as, I want to hear about the truth behind sending out a communication letter with ambiguity.

I look forward to hearing from you soon

Your sincerely,

Yusa

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, well, while, as well as, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42533936652 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57440216915 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.0550031902 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449242637877 0.216113520407 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162191195239 0.0766984524023 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110272181471 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279355687603 0.12726935374 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882899773802 0.0580467560999 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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