You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: » explain why you are writing » express

Essay topics:

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

» explain why you are writing

» express concern about the missing card

» ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the misplaced Bank card.

I am a customer of your IDFC Bank, maintaining a current account since 2015. My account number Is 55654546546516546. I received a letter from you Bank stating the issue of the new Bank Card with higher credit limit. However, when I opened the envelope to my surprise! They Bank card was missing.

I am worried about the lost card might create some unfavourable and inconvenient situations for me The person having my Bank card might use it either for any fraudulent activities or might make some expensive purchases.

I would request you to kindly block the lost card so that it is not misused by anyone. Moreover, I would request you to kindly issue me a new card as soon as possible as there are some urgent payments that have to be made. Additionally, please make sure that this mistake does not happen in future and no client suffer because of the negligence done by your staff.

I hope you will prioritise my request and will take necessary actions as early as possible .

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Prabhpreet Kaur

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Line 11, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e necessary actions as early as possible . I am looking forward to hearing from...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77611940299 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70647236228 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2459812235 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395516132565 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140120633427 0.0766984524023 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117026796952 0.0603063233224 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195409685359 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124908162167 0.0580467560999 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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