You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:explain why you are writingexpress concern about

Essay topics:

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

explain why you are writing

express concern about the missing card

ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir,

I have been using your bank services for 2 years. My name is Venkatesh and the account number is 100010101. Reson behind writing this letter is in connecting with the missing card in the envelope.

Being a Hotel Manager I use my card on everyday transactions. Unfortunately, my old card was deactivated. As per my previous conversation with the customer care person, I would be receiving my card today and can activate it immediately. Based on it I arranged my financial transaction plan. It would be an issue with my customers whom I need to transfer money and It will directly affect my reputation.

As this mistake was not from my side I want you to please arrange my card within two days. If it is not possible to courier I can visit the nearest branch to receive it.

Expecting a reply from you. Thank you.

Yours Faithfully,

Venkatesh

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I have been using your bank services for...
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... the missing card in the envelope. Being a Hotel Manager I use my card on e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ill directly affect my reputation. As this mistake was not from my side I w...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill directly affect my reputation. As this mistake was not from my side I wan...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...please arrange my card within two days. If it is not possible to courier I can vis...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... the nearest branch to receive it. Expecting a reply from you. Thank you. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cting a reply from you. Thank you. Yours Faithfully, Venkatesh ...
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...you. Yours Faithfully, Venkatesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84768211921 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86095781195 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.383793156 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21986452245 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877652074571 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706955571995 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151995247796 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069441475704 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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