Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include:
• Why you want to join the team
• What you can do to assist
• Queries related to the trip.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards to the upcoming trip to Singapore. Since, the school is on a lookout for a parent to accompany the students and my child is also a part of the same group, I have decided to submit my application of interest. As you are aware, I am a doctor and my work location is Singapore, hence, I'm quite familiar with the place.
Let me explain my contribution in detail. Firstly, the students can stay at my house as it is very big and spacious to accommodate all, thus saving the cost of lodging. Secondly, I can provide some useful insights on the itinerary to make the trip not just educational but also relaxing for the students. Lastly, since I am in the medical profession the safely and well-being of the children will be given utmost importance.
However, I would like to ask a few questions regarding the cost of the trip. Could you please let me know if my flight and food expenses will be covered by the school or I need to bear them?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Mary Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r or Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to the upcoming trip to Singapore. Since, ...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d my work location is Singapore, hence, Im quite familiar with the place. Let m...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51030927835 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61285298935 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1059955445 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 4.34317383033 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243375268348 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756292256882 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607987769763 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130317249688 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059513932058 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.